Some say the Muses are nine: how careless!
Look,
there's Sappho too, from Lesbos, the tenth.
--Anthologia
Palatina, Plato
Sappho in Roman fresco from Regio VI in Pompeii. Museo Archeologico Nazionale (Naples). |
Sappho
was a Greek musician and poet born in approximately 620 BCE. While Sappho was
said to have composed nine books of poetry, only one complete poem has survived
to modernity. All that remains of her other works are fragments: single words
from the ends of lines, a brief whisper of an image.
This
week let Sappho be your muse. Write the poem missing from these enjambments:
[] blame
[]swollen
[]you take your fill. For
[] my thinking
[]not thus
[]is arranged
[]nor
all night long [] I am
aware
[] of evil doing
[]
[]other
[]minds
[]blessed ones
Or
use one
of these fragments as a seed for your work, as the stone plunging into the
water—let your art ripple out from it:
you came and I was crazy
for you
and you cooled my mind that
burnt with longing
I would not think to touch
the sky with two arms
neither for me honey nor
the honey bee
Feel
free to post or link your work in the comments.
All
translations of Sappho’s fragments were taken from one of my favorite books, If Not, Winter: Fragments of Sappho by
Anne Carson, 2002.
http://mrlwilliams.tumblr.com/post/90324414108/poem-30-version-1
ReplyDeleteYou're right, I carry the blame
Leaving the moment swollen
I let you take your fill. For replacing all of my thinking
Originally, it was not thus
But the game is arranged,
Not to unite us in the day nor
all night long together, I am aware
, But to meander us in the web of evil doing
Separate in the search for an end to draught
Turning back to see only other
And now held aloft by debtor minds
. But for allowing for this, we could have been blessed ones
Wow M, u have such strong expression. Some of my favorite parts "leaving the moment swollen," "For replacing all of my thinking" "to meander us" and the last line too. There were some parts I wanted clarification, maybe worth fleshing out/clarifying the end outside of the form of the prompt. What is a debtor mind? This seems important.
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